She's an eternal beauty.......
54Moist and warm her touch
wet and prying her caress
I move my hands across olive colored beauty
dreaming of our undress
Moisture seeps from eternal heat
my touch beckons her on
And a warm soft glow within her liquid form
reachs far beyond
Orgasmic pleasures ......no other way
to describe her feel
She owns me now as I close my eyes
as all my layers peel
The warm glow of a drink
intoxicated mood of pleasure
How far will she take me
too far I know to measure
And finally it all comes together
the two meet and rub
Such are the guilty pleasures of me
and my beautiful hot tub!
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You had me dreaming. Until I got to the end ! Well written.
Hi ahorsebck.
A super hub had me going. Loved the end and I totally agree with you.
LOL Ghaelach
LOL This made me smile so wide. I've always like the scenes of people in hot tubs with bottles of wine or glasses of martinis.
This is a sensuous poem and a great image of a hot tub. I understand your love affair.
This is a hoot...Love it...
Cleaner , Thank you very much! Thats really nice...:-}
Ghaelach, Hey Im glad I got you going !, It happens to me all the time , too imaginative ,I guess! Thank you.....:-}
Gypsy Rose , Im just a micro brew kind of guy though , not too sophisticated!LOL....:-]
SligoBay , Gerry! Greetings my man, Yes I was looking at wooden hot tubs online and thinking about .......well lets just say I was thinking!...lol...:-}
Always , Too Too much time and imagination on my hands !lol, Thank you ....:-}
A brilliant poem and I loved it.
Take care my friend and have a wonderful day.
Eddy.
Eiddwen , When I think of Ireland , England and Scotland , my roots ! I think of my new found friends like you.....:-} Be well!
She's a bit like a "wood nymph" from the look of her.
You are certainly getting very naughty....you almost had me there...lol
Hi Sligo , yes ! I was actually looking at wood tubs , and got lost with my imagination ,Thanks Jerry !...:-}
Cardisa ! Who ? meeee? No ,this is all about a cedar tub ........what were you thinking?Hmmmm?.....:-}
Oh you took us to the edge with this, who would have thought??... a hot tub!!! It's funny, but when I re-read this knowing the context I feel the warm, liquid soothing, orgasmic pleasure you speak of, but not quite in the same way as the first time around :)
Magic erotic words any which way!! Brilliant and sneaky Ahorseback.
Hi fennelseed ! Thats me , sneaky !I hope you are well my friend . Glad that it Gotcha!lol.....:-}
haha...good one ahorseback!
I thought this was some valentine special...lol
I gottch Ruchuria , lol...:-} I was looking at hot tubs online !
nice, makes you think about things a little different. thanks for sharing.
Flicka , Thank you for caring ........:-}
Saw your whole poem as a vision from the first line, well done!
F5487Laura, And loook everyone , another young and beautiful writer that we must catch up with !Thank you Laura!......:-}
cleaner3 3 months ago
This is poetry !!!
Words are used with eloquence and detail.
Nuff said!!